![]() ![]() ![]() This one was, so a big goal was to make people root for Lydia and Eden. What makes a pairing shippable? I really had to dig into that in a way I didn’t have to for The Songbird’s Refrain – that book wasn’t really about the romance. ![]() How are they growing, what are they learning? How are the chapters building on each other to lead to the next big plot beat? I’m really pleased with where this book ended up, pacing-wise. It’s more than just getting the right scenes at the right time – so much of it is about how your characters are engaging with those scenes. I learned a lot about pacing during this book.I feel like I really leveled up my setting descriptions during this book! I really had to stretch myself out of my comfort zones – early drafts kept Lydia and Eden mostly to pretty plain or repetitive places, and getting them into more exciting spots really made for a more exciting narrative!. ![]()
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